Friday, 2 March 2012

Improved film treatment


 

A young girl called Angelica has been constantly tormented by the death of her father. As her mother was always at work Angelica and her sister grew a close connection between each other and father. Their mother works very long hours and with the lack of a good income Angelica and Amelia are left alone to fend for themselves most of the time. Angelica and Amelia are trying to come to terms with their loss and are left alone to greet the new costumers that will be renting out the vacant room in their family home to help bring in some income.

With Angelica being the youngest she is finding it the hardest to cope with it all. Angelica and her sister reflect by looking at pictures of their father but one day it all gets the better of her and Amelia and she becomes very drawn into herself, barley communicating with anyone. After recently posting a vacancy for a room in a shop window the girls get a call from a man called Fabio who has a 7 year old son called Andres and want to move in as soon as possible.

Amelia arranges for the Fabio and Andres to come a view the room at midday and they both wait for their arrival. As midday is approaching the doorbell rings for the boys to view the room. They all sit down to discuss prices and the contract for being a tenant. As Amelia and Angelica finalise the first payment, Amelia offers to get Andres a drink while Angelica shows Fabio to his room. A sudden slam of a door is heard upstairs and a very loud scream. After 5 minutes Angelica runs down the stairs with her hands covered in blood, a smile emerges upon her face as laughing is heard from the downstairs room where Amelia cradles Andres.






Daddy’s Little Girl
Written by Wendy Asumadu, Katherine Agudelo, Mellissa Baptiste











Final Shooting Script.

This script is the confidential and proprietary of Sylvester Productions and no portion of it may be performed, distributed, reproduced, used, quoted, or published without prior written permission.


CREDITS: SYLESTER PRODUCTIONS
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SYLVESTER PRODUCTIONS PRESENTS……….
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TITLE: DADDY’S LITTLE GIRL
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INT. ANGELICA’S BEDROOM
CLOSE UP SHOT of family photo.
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BLACK OUT. View black screen.
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FLASHBACK, images of graveyard
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CLOSE UP SHOT on Angelica’s eyes, moving into a MID SHOT of Angelica where she starts to look at the family photo of herself and her dad. She starts to get emotional, smiling yet also looking sad.
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FLASHBACK, images of graveyard, followed by CLOSE UP SHOT of Angelica’s face and eyes. She’s crying.
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EXT. FATHER AND SON WALKING.
TRACKING SHOT of the father and son walking towards a shop
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MID SHOT, FOLLOWING CLOSE SHOT of father talking on the phone
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MID SHOT of Amelia talking on the phone
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ZOOM SHOT of father and son walking towards Amelia and Angelica’s house.
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MID SHOT of father and son knocking on the door
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MID SHOT of father and son and Angelica and her mother (Amelia) conversating
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CLOSE UP SHOT of Angelica’s face looking angry and moody.
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MID SHOT, FOLLOWED BY TRACKING SHOT of Angelica and the father walking towards the stairs
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UPWARDS TILT SHOT of Angelica and the father walking up the stairs.
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MID SHOT of Angelica leading the father into their new room
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DIAGETIC SOUND of the door slamming
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DIAGETIC SOUND of the father screaming
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This is our shooting script for our trailer.

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