Thursday, 10 May 2012
Final music
After me and Wendy made the music Wendy went back and decided to make a few changes as she said she tought it should be a bit more scary. On logic pro there are so many ways to make a scary song and she explored these with me on the day we went and made the music. There was a lot i learned that day as i had never heard of logic pro until that day and i learnt to used it and drag and drop the music needed.
This is the final piece that Wendy finished as she added a few more instruments and fixed it up a bit.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=D0nan8Oban0
This is the final piece that Wendy finished as she added a few more instruments and fixed it up a bit.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=D0nan8Oban0
Changes to the thriller
As a group, we decided to make changes to our thriller.
"Before we planned at the start of the thriller that you would view a young girl crying at a grave and then runs home after crying too much. We decided that she is instead crying in her bedroom then she has flashbacks of clips of her dad and herself together and also a graveyard.We felt that going to a graveyard and looking at a gravestone was quite rude and offensive, so adding images of a long shot of a graveyard was more respectful. We also want to add black outs which mean black background of shots will be edited into the footage to create a spooky effect. Whilst this is occurring, a family will be walking around trying to find a room to rent out and coming across the young girls house.
Our proposed plan was that the young girl lived in a Bed and Breakfast hotel, however we decided to change this setting into a house that rents their rooms. We decided to make this change due to the fact that it would be very hard for us to find a house the resembled a Bed and Breakfast. Even if we did, we wouldn't be able to afford the props to convey this concept. Overall, the idea of a Bed and Breakfast was too time consuming and expensive."
those are he changes us as a group decided to make on the thriller as we thought it would be better and much more attractive to the target audience. The bed and breakfast idea was a very fast decission that we made without thinking it properly so when we came to do it we saw that there were difficulties and things that were notpossible. Overall i think our final idea was the best as it goes well with the target audience and our theme. We worked hard on it and madwe sure we checked everything over and over again.
"Before we planned at the start of the thriller that you would view a young girl crying at a grave and then runs home after crying too much. We decided that she is instead crying in her bedroom then she has flashbacks of clips of her dad and herself together and also a graveyard.We felt that going to a graveyard and looking at a gravestone was quite rude and offensive, so adding images of a long shot of a graveyard was more respectful. We also want to add black outs which mean black background of shots will be edited into the footage to create a spooky effect. Whilst this is occurring, a family will be walking around trying to find a room to rent out and coming across the young girls house.
Our proposed plan was that the young girl lived in a Bed and Breakfast hotel, however we decided to change this setting into a house that rents their rooms. We decided to make this change due to the fact that it would be very hard for us to find a house the resembled a Bed and Breakfast. Even if we did, we wouldn't be able to afford the props to convey this concept. Overall, the idea of a Bed and Breakfast was too time consuming and expensive."
those are he changes us as a group decided to make on the thriller as we thought it would be better and much more attractive to the target audience. The bed and breakfast idea was a very fast decission that we made without thinking it properly so when we came to do it we saw that there were difficulties and things that were notpossible. Overall i think our final idea was the best as it goes well with the target audience and our theme. We worked hard on it and madwe sure we checked everything over and over again.
Improved shooting script
Daddy’s Little Girl
Written by Wendy Asumadu, Katherine Agudelo, Mellissa Baptiste
Final Shooting Script.
This script is the confidential and proprietary of Sylvester Productions and no portion of it may be performed, distributed, reproduced, used, quoted, or published without prior written permission.
OPENING CREDIT: SYLESTER PRODUCTIONS
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SYLVESTER PRODUCTIONS PRESENTS……….
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OPENING CREDIT: SERENE FOSTER and CIARAN SAVAGE
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MID SHOT of SERENE FOSTER and CIARAN SAVAGE
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OPENING CREDIT: also featuring REBECCA REDDING, KEVIN AGUDELO
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TITLE: DADDY’S LITTLE GIRL
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INT. ANGELICA’S BEDROOM
CLOSE UP SHOT of family photo.
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BLACK OUT. View black screen.
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FLASHBACK, images of graveyard
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CLOSE UP SHOT on Angelica’s eyes, moving into a MID SHOT of Angelica where she starts to look at the family photo of herself and her dad. She starts to get emotional, smiling yet also looking sad.
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FLASHBACK, images of graveyard, followed by CLOSE UP SHOT of Angelica’s face and eyes. She’s crying.
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EXT. FATHER AND SON WALKING.
TRACKING SHOT of the father and son walking towards a shop
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MID SHOT, FOLLOWING CLOSE SHOT of father talking on the phone
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MID SHOT of Amelia talking on the phone
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ZOOM SHOT of father and son walking towards Amelia and Angelica’s house.
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MID SHOT of father and son knocking on the door
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MID SHOT of father and son and Angelica and her mother (Amelia) having a conversation
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CLOSE UP SHOT of Angelica’s face looking angry and moody.
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MID SHOT, FOLLOWED BY TRACKING SHOT of Angelica and the father walking towards the stairs
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UPWARDS TILT SHOT of Angelica and the father walking up the stairs.
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MID SHOT of Angelica leading the father into their new room
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DIAGETIC SOUND of the door slamming
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DIAGETIC SOUND of the father screaming
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WHITE NOISE
*I improved the shooting script as we have made a few changes in our thriller concept.