Changes to the thriller

As a group, we  decided to make changes to our thriller.


"Before we planned at the start of the thriller that you would view a young girl crying at a grave and then runs home after crying too much. We decided that she is instead crying in her bedroom then she has flashbacks of clips of her dad and herself together and also a graveyard.We felt that going to a graveyard and looking at a gravestone was quite rude and offensive, so adding images of a long shot of a graveyard was more respectful. We also want to add black outs which mean black background of shots will be edited into the footage to create a spooky effect. Whilst this is occurring, a family will be walking around trying to find a room to rent out and coming across the young girls house.


Our proposed plan was that the young girl lived in a Bed and Breakfast hotel, however we decided to change this setting into a house that rents their rooms. We decided to make this change due to the fact that it would be very hard for us to find a house the resembled a Bed and Breakfast. Even if we did, we wouldn't be able to afford the props to convey this concept. Overall, the idea of a Bed and Breakfast was too time consuming and expensive."

those are he changes us as a group decided to make on the thriller as we thought it would be better and much more attractive to the target audience.  The bed and breakfast idea was a very fast decission that we made without thinking it properly so when we came to do it we saw that there were difficulties and things that were notpossible. Overall i think our final idea was the best as it goes well with the target audience and our theme. We worked hard on it and madwe sure we checked everything over and over again.